I recommend putting an "executive summary" up front. The law enforcement personnel I often visit with tell me to "punch" them upfront with the big picture and leave out the details. Then give them all of the nitty gritty details. If they want to read that much, it's available, but they don't have to "waste" their time to get the facts.
I get the same response from law enforcement. I used to word my SARs "Who, What, Where, When, Why, How" ... but have since changed the order to "What, How, Who first - the rest later"
Mind you this is for the long & lengthy detailed repetitive SARs ...but I list in my narrative what SAR Documentation I have available & simply state that I have "Detailed individual transactions by teller, location, date, & time". If they want it - they call & ask.